literature

Too Good To Be True

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i never thought
that you would leave me

the promises you made
it seemed to be so true
so real

the three words you said to me
seemed to flow in the air forever

and when out lips met
it felt incredible
like i was whole
and filled with the most happiness
that anyone had ever experienced

now that you're gone
i cannot take it
i dont have the courage to suicide
not a speck
such a coward

i found a spell
i found a solution
i stopped time
and rewinded
to when
we had out hands in hands

but things went wrong
in that scene
you seemed alive
and you left me once again
before i even pressed play

it was too good to be true
alrite honestly this has nothing to dow ith me jst wanted to use "too good to be true" in some poem, and i was bored so i rushed it
another crappy poem sorry
tats bout it that i hav to say bye
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Mithril-Dragoness's avatar
Oh but I like it! And poems don't always have to be about you/do with you...you can always have some of your own fun and make the character up entirely :D