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digging my self into my bed
hugging my pillow tight against my chest
leaning on to it
desperate for a supporter
to be dependent

taps turned on
warm water danced swiftly
down towards the floor
horrible squeaking from the rusty pipes

gripping the pillow tightly in my needy hands
fidgeting- trying to find a little comfort

something
someone
was staring at me
smiling

scared to be seen, i looked up
there i saw
sitting gracefully upright
eyes sparkling under the smiling light

desperate once again
i leapt over to it
hugging it tightly
and leaning onto its soft feather-like shoulders
feeling its spiritual warmth
vivid from the atmosphere

time seemed to past fast
warm water just ran out
and the squeaking quieted down

i looked up
at the innocent face
that's looking onto my gloomy face

my heavy eyes fell upon its smile
and there..
it created another smile
a fragile smile
upon another's face

"thank you"
©2007-2009 ~maddy39
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Author's Comments

i saw a pic
on pon and zi
and this time its jst one of them
hugging a teddy
saying: a teddies dont hug back, but sometimes, their all you've got.

tats wat inspired me to write this
= = its VERY LONG LOL
and it isnt as good as my other ones
lol this is wat turns out usually = = if u force me to write something out of no where XD

sorry bout the quality of the writing lol

and at the end i said thank u
to the teddy lol

and dont get me wrong
i didnt cry onto a teddy's arms lol i cried on my pillow

^^ gotta run! byeeesss lol

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:iconvladisrafel:
T_T For some reason, when reading your poem I remembered precisely the po and zi cartoon.

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:iconmaddy39:
XD - - read my err...artist comment?:S or wateva it is XD this ones based on pon and zi!! lol!

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:iconvladisrafel:
:P I did. I mean, before reading the artist comment, already Po and Zi came to my mind.

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:iconmaddy39:
ohhh lol =p cool okay =p

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:iconnonstopme:
Loved it ;)

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:iconmaddy39:
lol thanks =] i forgot bout this poem..

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hehe, then i'm glad u remembered it.. Cuz it's too good to stay in the drawer.. ;)

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haha thank u once again=]

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